Most sales emails make the same 5 mistakes.

This is a more visual episode than usual.
Why not catch this one on YouTube https://youtu.be/VoGp4KmHy24

In this short 'tear down' I take a good email and make it rock.

Common mistakes are.

📈 All about you
📈 Too long
📈 False compliments
📈 External links
📈  A CTA that asks for too much

What do you think? Is the email better after my re-write or was it better before?

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