In which Peter and Xander are joined by their sister, Elizabeth! She provides feedback and a set of fresh eyes.

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• Peter’s website
• Xander’s website
• Elizabeth’s website
• Night Crew Comic - 24 fairly rubbish comics made by Xander a few years ago. Now Peter is making it into a really quite good audio sitcom

Short Term Homework

• XANDER: Summarise the plot into bullet points
• PETER: BUMmarise the BOTTOM into BUTTet points
• Think about the B-Plot lawyers
• How do Olivia and Toby get out of the climax?

Watching/ long term homework

• Peter watch The Daredevil Scene and the episode of The Nanny where Fran gets mugg [...]