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The podcast in front of you
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rattles unsettlingly. Something skitters inside. The
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label shifts into view. Warning. Adult
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content. Pseudopod,
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episode 896 for December 8th, 2023. Duen
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by Susan Palumbo. Narrated
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by Mercedes Modeste. Hosted
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by Amanda Weiss. Audio by
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Chelsea Davis. Hey
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everyone, welcome to a new episode of Pseudopod. My
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name is Amanda Weiss and I am Associate
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Professor of Japanese at Georgia Tech and editor
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of Hivemind Magazine. I'm also very happy
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to be your host this week. Our
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story is Duen by Susan Palumbo. This
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story was originally published in The Dark Magazine
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and reprinted in the 2023 collection, Skin Thief.
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Susan Palumbo is a Trinidadian,
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Canadian, speculative fiction writer and
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editor. Her short fiction has
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been nominated for the Nebula, Aurora, and
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World Fantasy Awards. She also
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co-founded the Ignite Awards with L.D. Lewis
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and edited the Strange Horizons Caribbean issue
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with Marika Bailey. Her
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dark fantasy horror collection, Skin Thief
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Stories, was published by Neon Hemlock
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in 2023. Her
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novella, Countess, will be published by ECW
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Press in 2024. Her
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work has been featured in The
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Dark Magazine, Lightspeed, Nightmare, and Pseudopod.
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When she isn't writing, she can be
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found listening to New Wave, sketching, or
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wandering in her local misty forest. Find
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her on Instagram at Gothic Syntax
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and on her website at susanpalumbo.wordpress.com.
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She is officially represented by Michael Curry
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of the Donald Mass Literary Agency. Mercedes
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Modeste is not the well-known
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Benz. However, she is driven
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by creativity. This young
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woman from the beautiful Caribbean is a
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finance student by day, storyteller and poet
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by night. She adores art,
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dance, music, volunteering. and
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baking. With the
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belief that any art form is the
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best medicine, she enjoys utilizing her talents
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to inspire and share with others. And
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now we have a story for you and we promise
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you it's true. Sweens
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by Suzanne Paloumi. Nerese
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by Mercedes-M She
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was crying so hard. She was
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shiggin' like when grandma died and
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fancy. Mama's aunt had to
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hold mama up tight tight to
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keep mama from falling down. At
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grandma's funeral, fantasy, juru
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shalini, you have to hold
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up yourself. You have your dosa
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salmanza to bring up. You
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must be strong, but she... Mama,
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while she owned his and stopped
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crying then, but she
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smiled with spoil. I
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tried to come to this school and eat
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all the rice and provision I hate when
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she cooked them for dinner. But
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mama see she heart was
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broken. But true,
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she eyes didn't shine full happy like
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they did before. This
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time in the cemetery, fancy
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didn't see anything because
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even she was bawling like
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a howl. With everybody else,
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mama was the loudest. She
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voice was like a cut lash chopping
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straight through the noise. Daddy
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stand up stiff next to she
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and was silent like a
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story. I know
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why nobody tell mama to hold up sheselv
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this time. It was
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because it was me, dead
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in the casket, in the bottom
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of the hole. It was my
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funeral, except... I
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wasn't in the box. I
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was standing behind one of the concrete
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headstool watching Mama and all my
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aunties and uncles bowl. I
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cried too, because I didn't
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remember how I get there and I didn't want to be
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there. I
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remember I was playing in the yard. I
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run to get my bowl and then bam,
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something hit me. Pain,
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pain so sharp in my chest like
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a knife when I breathe in. Mama
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was freemen, but she voiced them get
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farther and farther away. Come
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back, Mama, I thought.
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Where you going? Then everything
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gone black and I wake up
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in this dead people place. I
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received no more pain. No
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freemen. I put my hand
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on my chest to check what happened. I
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wasn't wearing the pink furled dress that I'd
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been there for months as a baby. I
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was naked from a belly up, wearing
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a long grass suit and
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a hat shaped like a cone. I
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tried to pull the hat off,
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but it was soft on my
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head. My
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whole body was wrong. From
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my ankles, my feet was twisted with
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my toes pointing behind. I
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sat on the grass and tried to swim
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right foot around to see the correct way,
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but it wouldn't go straight.
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When I woke around the grooves, my
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heels went in front of me, but
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my feet looked backwards. When
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my cousin, Shivani,
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and David, and them used
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to see dead children's birds,
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twins have backwards foot. When
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I asked Mama if what either tell me
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was true, she said, I
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can't tell you that child. I
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wanted to show my mom the seat when
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I see she in front of the grave
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until she dwells was real and I was
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frightened. But
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no one could see me and it had
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too many people around my momma's seat and
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she was going to be alright. Everything
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happened for a reason. Am
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I alright? I asked. My
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voice came out as a whistle and I
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couldn't stretch my mouth open. My
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backwards feet pull and I run to
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daddy's kindly parking lot and watch my
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face in the tinted window. A
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sharp pain hit my chest again
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because when I look at my face, my
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mouth was a tiny hole the size of a
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black tamarind seed and I
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had no nose nor eyes. My
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face was smooth like amnago skin. How
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could I see with no eyes? I
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had a jummy face. I screamed.
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I screamed but it came out
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as an angry whistle
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on the wind. I'm
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sorry, Sam. It was
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an accident. Uncle
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Ram was seen by my grave. He
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choked up crying and going back to sitting
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in Havana alone after. Everybody
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else was watching me, Ram. Nobody
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spoke for a long time. And
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then daddy who all mama by her
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shoulders turned around and walks
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you to the car. I
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didn't know if I could follow them. Didn't
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call my succumb. Didn't even
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look back for my son in the cemetery
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beside him. I
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was frozen where I was
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while I watched every car
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and van drive away. That
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was quiet except for
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the sound of the shush, shush
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of the waves from the sea
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nearby. I like
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when we whole farm used to go to the
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beach. We used to play. crickets
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and eat hot fried rice.
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Now the sound of the sea fill up
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my ears and head like it was inside
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of my skull. I didn't
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dare go near it. I
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didn't trust my backwards feet not to run
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on the ool. What if
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they walked me into the ocean and
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kept walking until I was covered? Later,
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two men drive up in a noisy
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baku, so loud and strong
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now the ocean is fine. They
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start to fill up the hole I was supposed
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to be in with my casket. All
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that did would have been dumped
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on me. I
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would have never climbed on the rocks. They
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were almost finished cleaning up the hole but
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I didn't want them to leave. So
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when did the noisy baku engine and
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get through shovel to smooth over the days on
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the grave? I went and
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stand behind the man who looked younger
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and didn't have a game. Excuse
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me mister. I whistle.
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He shake up at my voice
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like a cold breeze touchy. Hey
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boy! He
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trust himself and say to the next man, shall
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we hurry up and don't eat? I
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don't like to stay by child's reach. Where
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you think? Jigga, I want one dear.
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The older man laugh. You
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think I joking? The young
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man suck his teeth. You
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go see. Okay, okay. I
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want to don't do the
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older man say. He went
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back in the baku with his shovel and
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turn on the engine. Rest
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child. The young man whispered
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to my grave with his eyes closed.
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Then he went in the machine next to the
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old man and they drive
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away like mama and daddy. I
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sit back on the grave and cry. I
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cry so loud the whole time. the truth
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to love with a ringing whistle. People
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who were visiting or degrees covered the
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ears and run back to the guards.
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I was sure mama would hear me back
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home in the house and she would come
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and get me and hug me
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up and give my fruits
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and sour prunes like she did when
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she used to collect my from food.
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Mama never ever used to let
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me pray. She didn't
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come back. Then it
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started to get dark. I
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watched this swallow of the sun, the
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air change, it touched my skin
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like a bunch of cool hands and
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fingers all over my chest. I
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wanted my white and pink then and a
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couple nooks. I
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wanted to be inside. It's
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when was real. Then
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the sukmya and lukars
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and zombies that come out at night
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of pixie and take a full watch
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through too. I didn't
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want them in that kind of zombie. I
11:04
stay a week and watch them
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make sure none of them come from
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me. In
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the middle of the night, a lady
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tribe of 30th century, she
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had long straight hair
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and was wearing a black dress that
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reached her foot and a
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black feel that covered she face.
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Fancy did explain after grandma funeral
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that if you go to the
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cemetery at night, your
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mouth will through the front door
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of your own house backwards. When
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you go back home or the ghosts
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and them go for the inside. This
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lady didn't look like she was scared of
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ghosts at night or when she inside she
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else. When I
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get closer, she
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smells like the sandal wooden
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sand from where you stylized when she
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says she prays. I
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creep up quiet, you findy lady. I
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could kill them for left
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you dead, she was
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spot. I
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did tell them doctor, I
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did tell them, it wasn't
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well. And they insist,
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and insist I was crazy.
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I was what they say, overprotective.
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The lady's voice that she
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ate like mama's atmoscenerals, but
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softer. I'd be sound
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of slippers on the wood floor,
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but I knew someone
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gave you a bad eye.
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Them kusia, that's
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why I get sick. The
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lady wipes, she sees. Come
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back, and see my Alisa,
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she sees. She
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take out a bottle of liquid, and pour
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it on the grease. Don't
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be sad, Ansi, I
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was so softly. She
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turned, she had slowly and stay
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at many tasks. You
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know, Alisa, you could
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hear me, I jump back.
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Yes, Dwen, I could
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hear you. What is your name? Someone's
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asked, she knows. You
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see my daughter, Alisa Rongik, she
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was four, smaller than
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you. So, so,
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so she was. No
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Ansi, I guess yesterday, and
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nobody else here like me. The
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lady's shoulders drop. Do
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you miss your mama? She
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was looking at me, but her voice changed
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like she was talking to her baby. Yes,
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I do. I want to go,
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but my mama can't see me, see me
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like you. She
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rubs. She arms and shivers like the man
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in me. Pa-pa-co-glia
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that day. Where
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family livin'? You know the address?
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I go drop it by the yard. So
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it wouldn't be lonely. I
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think for a minute. I go
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get to see Mama and nod in the head.
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Okay, here we go. She
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touch her daughter's grave soon. Mommy
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loves her plenty, other song.
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Lady let me set up in the car
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next to she while she drives.
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I guess she's madress. She
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said it wasn't too far dry
14:40
from where she lives. Didn't
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talk much, but I
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could see tales of what's enough she sees. She
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car was full with little
14:52
colorful crosses and charms on the dash
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and hung in from the mirror. I
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tried to be his and be quiet, like
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I used to do for Mama, but I
15:02
had so many questions. How
15:04
come you can see on him and no one
15:07
else can't see? When
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he is a child, you can
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see everything she sees. And
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when people get big, some
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of them still see
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spurts and energy, but others
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lose that forever. I
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didn't actually hear anything else after that because
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she sees get hard like she was finished talking.
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When she turned the car into the
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tree where my house was, she stopped
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and turned off the headlights. You
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can walk the rest of the way. I
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don't want to drive up any people yet and
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make them. Yes, Auntie, I
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can walk, thank you. Good
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luck, little man. Sorry,
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sorry I never get a chance to live
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and grow up and experience life. I
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didn't know what to see, so I
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thought she sang. you again
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and watch it in Chicago
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and drive away. Then
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my back was equally method was the
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just only hell and a wrong
16:13
it is and I will reach home. When
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I reached the yard of we big
16:20
old house on the roof, Lenny the
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dog started back hard at me. He
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rushed up like he was going to bite me. Lenny
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doodoo is me Samantha puppy.
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I whistle and pass him on the head. Mama
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never let Lenny in the house
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but everybody knew he
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was my best friend next
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to my cousin Shavani. He
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calmed down when he hear my voice on Nick Masease.
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I laugh because it tickled the
16:49
same as before I died. All
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the lights in the house was off except
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for the one in Mama and
16:58
Daddy's bedroom. I
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tried to climb up the concrete steps in the
17:03
gallery but the thoughts stopped
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and I bounced back on me wrong
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and fall on the backside like when I get
17:10
hit before I died. I tried
17:13
but the back step and the backside
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again. I can't even see on
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the house and he hung on. Daddy hung on for me.
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He must be went inside the house backwards
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to keep mom. I see.
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I sit on the way
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from the yard. Okay that's a
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jumpy with commas or the cocoa bushes behind
17:32
me. I cry
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that Mama didn't want me in the house
17:37
like the dog but Lenny come
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and cuddle up next summer and I
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get nice and warm. I close
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my eyes and went to sleep. The
17:48
next morning Tanti come to
17:50
the house early with Uncle Ram
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and Shavani. Shavani was
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in Satna's funeral. Today
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she had on a new blue dress.
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He thought to go to work. He
20:02
looked even more serious than before. Tanti
20:05
come by in the afternoons and stay with
20:07
Mama. The whole time
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I sit in the same place watching
20:12
Mama's window, wishing
20:14
she would come to it and see me. I
20:17
wanted she to tell me a rhyme or a
20:19
story like she used to when she brushed my
20:21
hair. Would
20:24
she know me if she see me? She
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used to tell me she would never
20:30
ever let anything happen to her. The
20:34
days were so lonely and long.
20:37
I woke up and dug the trees,
20:41
scared the cats and the neighbors'
20:43
groups. Other animals
20:45
could see me just like many.
20:49
My next neighbor, Mr. Knox, comes
20:51
to quarrel with Daddy when often about
20:53
how Daddy didn't cut the grass, coming
20:56
off the trees for a long time. He
20:59
said he rode look amiss. Daddy
21:01
didn't leave any elbac as he
21:04
liked I see before. He
21:06
just said okay and went
21:08
to cut the grass. The
21:10
next night, I went
21:12
to Mr. Knox's house and finally got my
21:15
raps ready hard. He always
21:17
used to brag about how he
21:19
tree had the sweetest fruit. I
21:22
went and I bite each
21:25
and every hoamer rack
21:28
so they all toyed and he
21:30
would have none. Then
21:33
I chased the two dogs round and
21:35
round he housed until they bark and
21:37
wake everybody and he housed up
21:39
and his wife starts screaming, call
21:42
the police. I
21:44
run back to the house to the plum
21:47
tree and laugh and laugh. Daddy
21:50
was happy too and he looked nice. Mommy
21:54
comes to the window and mostly
21:56
crizzens. She look out
21:58
almost like was looking out. I came right at
22:00
me and then Closie drew the
22:03
stars. I closed my eyes and dream
22:05
of she singing must've sleep. The
22:07
next morning, Mama
22:10
came down the front step. She
22:13
didn't look like her mama. She
22:15
was so thin and now
22:17
she eyes was dark like
22:20
holes. She
22:22
clothes was hanging or she like, she
22:24
was a stick and she
22:26
had some gray hair. Mama,
22:29
it's me. I weave
22:31
and whistle. She shakes
22:34
her head and gets in she
22:36
coughs and drives away fast. When
22:39
she come back home, she was
22:41
wearing a red string tie around
22:43
she rests. She
22:45
didn't look at the tree where I was at
22:48
four. How weakly
22:50
so, Uncle Ron
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come over with Shavani by themselves.
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I want to play with Lenny daddy. Shavani
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said Uncle Ron while
23:01
he was speaking some bags out of the van.
23:04
Okay, Shavani stay in the yard. You
23:07
see and went on the steps. Yes
23:10
daddy, Shavani wept weeks
23:12
until he was inside and walked
23:14
straight up to her. What
23:17
she doing on to she in the yard she asked
23:20
and why she just find us. Do
23:22
you have any proper clues? Shavani
23:26
is me Samantha. I
23:29
say happy she could see
23:31
me. But this time my
23:33
voice wasn't a whistle. It's
23:35
come out exactly like Uncle Ron's voice
23:38
seems. Shavani, Shavani,
23:40
Shavani. Moover
23:42
and moover. There
23:45
was no voice, who whistled.
23:48
I come on a tiny motor
23:50
and back away from Shavani. No,
23:52
no, go away. But
23:55
again it come out and Shavani,
23:58
Shavani. and she
24:00
was fooling me. I couldn't
24:03
control my backwards feet. They
24:06
keep walking towards the cuckoo bush, leading
24:09
Shivani away from the house. My
24:12
chest went hot and
24:14
hard. Why Shivani
24:17
couldn't hear me properly? Shivani
24:21
could talk to Mama and wear
24:23
pretty dresses. I was cute
24:26
and I have to sit outside half naked
24:28
on the tree when she found her on
24:30
the ground with no digger. I
24:33
focus and call the Shivani louder
24:36
backing up into the edge of
24:38
cuckoo bushes. Shivani,
24:41
Shivani, Shivani,
24:44
Shivani, where going
24:46
y'all? On the ground
24:49
called from the top of the steps. Shivani
24:52
stop and stare at me. No
24:55
way, Daddy. She's there and run back to the
24:57
house. Lucky, I
25:01
scream, scaring a
25:04
cuckoo in her nearby tree. Shivani
25:06
looked back at me but on go
25:08
around didn't when they went inside the
25:11
house. I
25:13
sit down under my palm tree
25:16
and stare at Mama's window. So
25:19
vexed, I was shaken. That
25:22
evening, Daddy come over the house, scaring past
25:24
on the bed with Uncle Ram. We
25:28
hold a tick in my bed. I shout.
25:32
I run up to the van and try
25:34
to grab Daddy's arm. But he didn't
25:36
feel me. Stop. Don't
25:39
give it away. Don't let Shivani have
25:41
it. They went
25:43
back in and come out with more
25:46
pieces. I stumbled back
25:48
to my tree and hug up Lenny.
25:50
It was dark and the back
25:53
of the truck was full of my tings. Mama
25:57
come out. She looked so
25:59
pretty. I'm not so tired
26:01
anymore. I
26:03
hope you like the bed sets," she
26:05
says. Mama hugged Shivani
26:08
up tight. I
26:12
don't know if I had a heart anymore,
26:15
but as soon as it breaks, that
26:18
hug was for me before
26:20
she gets any back feet. Shivani
26:23
looked back at me. I
26:26
give she the wolf-cothole I could
26:28
from under the shoppid
26:30
hats. Then
26:32
Mama threw their own and went back inside.
26:36
How could you give Shivani my bed? I
26:39
asked before I cry all night.
26:43
These days, Mama puts
26:45
on the black, long-sleeved dress
26:47
she had on her funeral and gets
26:49
in she car. The
26:52
air feels heavy and I get
26:54
pulled to the car. Before
26:56
she starts to drive away, I
26:59
climb up on the trunk and sit down.
27:02
I wasn't scared of falling off. What
27:04
could happen to Mama? I
27:07
was already dead. The
27:09
road she took went through the whole
27:11
town. Past the market
27:14
and the chemist, she was
27:16
going back to the cemetery. When
27:18
she reached, she parked the car and
27:21
sits in it for a long,
27:23
long time. I
27:25
see she threw the back window. She
27:29
shoulders were shaken. What
27:31
change she needs, my sad. I
27:34
jump off the car and went on
27:36
a grave. It was
27:39
different now. Grass did grow
27:41
over the hole. You
27:43
would never know my body should be under the ground.
27:47
Hi, a little voicey.
27:50
A kid dressed like me with a
27:52
hat and grass I
28:01
actually touch and she shoulder.
28:03
How you know my name? She
28:06
say bouncing on one backwards foot.
28:09
Your mama has my get back home. She
28:11
was looking fair. Where was the
28:13
night she come to look fair? I
28:16
doesn't stay here during the night. It's
28:18
a scary bad old man zombie with
28:21
bright red eyes. If you
28:23
see her, he take off the top
28:25
of his head and acts it as touchy brain.
28:28
True. Then I
28:31
was lucky your mama bring my back home. I
28:34
see all kind of way people here. Is
28:36
that your mama coming? No.
28:39
She point towards the car park. Mama
28:42
was walking over some of the trees. Rain
28:44
she had. When she was
28:46
in front of it, she sit down and
28:49
put she hands flat on the grass. She
28:52
didn't move or say anything. I
28:57
want to see my mama too. Alyssa
29:00
say, eh, you can
29:02
wait till she come back to see you here
29:04
or you could get right with me back to
29:06
the tongue and look for she. She
29:09
say all you live in all you live in close
29:11
by week. Alyssa
29:14
clap. I want to come
29:16
with all you. Mama
29:19
look at me direction, but she
29:21
she had and look away. Okay
29:24
then. Who answers on me. I
29:27
tell her this is the first
29:29
time I get to sit with my mama since I
29:31
did. Alyssa run off
29:33
on she used towards the car. I
29:36
sit right next to mom. She
29:38
wasn't crying. Samantha.
29:42
She say in she's nice. So
29:45
boys, she's when
29:47
she week for school. I
29:52
hope you know. I love you so much.
29:55
I couldn't ever
29:57
be the same. She
29:59
stopped. like something catching she doot. I
30:03
know you're not that rusty. Me
30:06
too. But
30:09
things is going to start to change.
30:13
She wipes her face. I
30:15
want to tell you that. So
30:17
you know that. I love you. Then
30:21
she was quiet a long time.
30:23
The whole time she
30:25
told me it did feel like pieces
30:27
inside my chest was breaking apart. It
30:31
wasn't a sharpie not old. It
30:33
was a deep ache. And
30:35
she blew my grave a kiss
30:38
and started. I
30:40
follow she back to the car and sit next
30:42
to Alisa on the trunk. Alisa
30:45
put she on her own. That
30:47
was nice because I don't know when
30:49
was the last time somebody hugged me.
30:54
When we reached the village Alisa says
30:56
she has to jump off the trunk by the
30:58
cat. How you
31:00
gonna find your mama house if you don't know where address.
31:03
I asked she before she jump off at
31:05
the main junction. I go
31:08
go to the market and wait for she did. Okay
31:11
bye. I go as
31:14
the car driver fast and left little
31:17
Alisa behind in the dark. People
31:21
start to come last to the house. Mama
31:23
would sit on the gallery steps every day and
31:25
talk on the phone to Tanti or she cousins.
31:29
I threw she voice was heavy heavy
31:31
and she didn't talk much but
31:33
slowly she started to move.
31:36
She's on better and that make me
31:38
happy. One day on
31:41
the phone she laugh and
31:43
it makes me jump. It was
31:45
a quick bubbling thing that she ate
31:47
my chest. I
31:50
laugh with she and that
31:52
make Lenny starts a whole
31:54
and whole. Mama
31:56
laugh at him whole and the
31:58
song fell off the air. and film
32:00
up too. Mama's
32:03
clothes start to get tight. She
32:06
fears get around her. See
32:08
my shibali. One
32:11
day, Ongeram's ramp drop, turned
32:14
to Anshivani by the house.
32:17
Shivani was holding a burden
32:19
in shehand at sea. Beevi,
32:22
on it. Then all
32:24
the aunties and cousins come. The
32:27
aunties was laughing and talking and
32:30
dancing to Soka while the kids stay
32:32
with Lenny below the house. Lenny
32:35
puppy! I called but
32:37
he wouldn't come. He was
32:39
busy jumping with Shivani and David and
32:41
the other cousins haven't fun. Lenny!
32:43
I scream at him. All
32:46
the kids look at me under the tree. Lenny
32:50
didn't move and Shivani grabbed
32:52
the collar. No, no, Lenny!
32:54
Don't go by she. That
32:56
is our Jumbie. The other
32:58
little kids scream when she says Jumbie
33:01
and run up the gallery steps. That
33:04
is her twin. Look at her dress and look
33:06
at his foot. David
33:08
picks up her spoon and tells the satin
33:10
there. He missed and
33:12
I laughed so hard all the kids had
33:15
to cover their ears. Then
33:17
David threw another rock. This time it
33:19
hit me right in the center of
33:22
my chest. It
33:24
hit me. On the
33:26
same way like when I was alive was more
33:29
inside like a boon.
33:33
Then the other cousins all started to
33:35
rock sadness, hit in my every way
33:37
and I had to run in the gopo bush to
33:39
hide. What happened to all of
33:41
you? I hear Tanti voice
33:43
from a hiding spot. It's
33:46
a what went fancy. Shivani says
33:49
everybody was quiet. All
33:51
the comments are the hosts. Tanti says I
33:54
stay in the bush with the bugs and lizard
33:56
and rooms until I reach night and everybody
33:59
born home. Lenny,
34:01
Lenny puppy come, he
34:04
come over and wimp on like Mufis.
34:08
Now you're on men, before when
34:10
Siobhan was dead and want to come by me. Mufis
34:13
get hot like a flambeau,
34:17
I stand up and whistle like Lenny's
34:19
accounts. Then I
34:21
lead Lenny into the bush, walk
34:23
and walk in the dark, deep,
34:26
deep into the forest. I
34:29
whistle and whistle and soon I
34:32
could hear wild dogs barking so
34:34
crisp and vexed. Puppies
34:38
come, I call as I
34:40
climb up a tree, I look away
34:42
when Lenny crawl and the wild dogs
34:44
tear him apart. I
34:47
wasn't so bad, that I
34:49
could watch that. Two
34:52
days later, Daddy and Uncle
34:54
Ran went in the bush to look for
34:56
Lenny. I could hear them call
34:58
me all day, Siobhan cry,
35:01
when they come back and tell she Lenny was gone.
35:04
I cry too, because I shouldn't have killed
35:06
my puppy. Mama
35:10
had the baby, my brother. Daddy
35:13
was happy, he smiled and
35:15
laughed when people come to
35:17
visit. Siobhan and
35:19
Dizir and all had the little
35:21
cousins came to see the baby. They
35:25
call him Rajeev, so
35:27
Rajeev. Sometimes,
35:30
Mommy would put Rajeev
35:32
in the basket and
35:35
on the gallery and so can Siobhan.
35:38
I would listen and pretend she
35:40
was singing, so meek. But
35:43
then she would take Rajeev inside
35:45
and I'd be all alone again, with
35:47
no one. Not
35:50
even Lenny. Soon,
35:54
Rajeev was talking all kinds of
35:56
silly words and trying to walk.
36:00
uncle Ram and Shivani was an anti-com
36:02
mover. They did blow kisses and
36:04
laugh at every noise he makes. He
36:07
was cute. Maybe
36:09
he looks like me. But then
36:11
Shivani started the call. Rajiv,
36:14
brother. One day
36:16
on the gallery, mama said, that's right. He
36:18
is your brother. My
36:20
chest went red hot and hard
36:22
again. I wanted to drag
36:24
Shivani in the bush by she here, but
36:26
I couldn't because she never came near the clumsy
36:28
anymore. I wasn't
36:31
going to get bigger. Nobody
36:33
spoke to me and anyone who gets
36:35
see my last mile pelts in my
36:37
wood rocks like Shivani or David. Mama
36:40
never let Rajiv come on the
36:43
grass. Daddy was busy with
36:45
Luke and all right
36:47
in front of my Shivani was
36:49
calling Rajiv, brother. He
36:52
is not a brother yet, chuckass.
36:55
I scream. My voice come
36:57
out like the crow that he meet before
36:59
he dies. Everyone look
37:02
up at the clumsy. Even
37:04
Rajiv and mama. Mama
37:06
scrunched up she faced like she was
37:08
willing to cry. Now
37:10
we were inside everybody. She said, pick up
37:12
Rajiv from the garden. The
37:15
next day a familiar car come up in
37:17
the yard. It
37:19
was Alisa's mother, the auntie
37:21
who brought me home from the cemetery.
37:24
Auntie went inside the house. Alisa
37:27
slip out the car and comes to sit with
37:29
me under the tree. I
37:31
put my arm around she and she had mama's
37:33
window. How come all
37:35
day I ask she? You don't
37:38
know? Alisa see picking up
37:40
one of the almost yellow plums that
37:42
had fallen off the tree. My
37:46
mother is a vallajobian woman. Her
37:48
true? Yes, she not.
37:51
And your mother calls she and says have a
37:53
bad spirit in the plum tree. And
37:55
ask the mother to get rid of it. Mama
37:59
asked she. She took care of her. I
38:02
held myself back from screaming. This
38:05
was worse than when mama left
38:08
my anti-semitry. I
38:11
hock up Alyssa so tight
38:14
I would have crushed she wounds if she was
38:16
alive. She didn't complain. Then
38:19
Alyssa's mother come down the steps and woke up
38:21
to us under the tree. She
38:26
was pretty and had beautiful
38:28
dark skin. All
38:31
the earrings she smelled like sandalwood again.
38:34
This was when she said your mother asked me
38:36
to get rid of the bad spirit right
38:38
in the street. I don't
38:40
know all what she could see on here but
38:42
she says to have anything to do with you
38:45
to put up protection spells to keep
38:47
you from muting yourself and the utter
38:50
assurance. She
38:52
mouthed in dung after she turned around.
38:55
What you go to auntie is
38:57
actually still hock up
38:59
Alyssa. It's me who bring
39:01
her hair and I won't do anything to suit you.
39:04
I woke up a forecast alone so
39:07
you can't come in the yard at all but
39:09
I cannot control English and
39:11
you could have free reign of that. She
39:14
nudged she had asthma. I
39:16
was quiet for a long time. She
39:49
had so hard all the
39:52
animals' names runaway died. Auntie's
39:55
splash was there on the yard
39:58
and shunt quietly. I
40:00
hear she gets in she care. I
40:03
was so hot and relaxed. I thought I
40:05
would set the whole forest on fire. How
40:08
could Mama do this? How
40:10
she could forget me? I
40:13
banged my sister against her tree, but
40:15
it wasn't Mama's fault. It
40:17
was Shivani showing off that
40:20
getting her upset on purpose made
40:22
Mama scared for she sells energy.
40:27
I was so loud to the trees in Iraq. I
40:31
waved patient until I hear Uncle Ram's call
40:33
one day. I
40:36
complained, yeah, daddy? She
40:38
said, Shivani asked. I
40:41
stayed quiet until I
40:43
was sure Uncle Ram was inside the
40:45
house and I could hear Shivani's bones
40:47
in our bowls. My
40:51
old one. I
40:53
whimper like Lenny as loud
40:55
as I could from the bush. The
40:58
bones didn't stop. Then,
41:00
stop again. I
41:03
remember all the times I held daddy, see Lenny?
41:06
I whine so hard it's
41:08
echo in the head and
41:10
Shivani stopped again. Lenny,
41:13
Shivani called and
41:15
says she with Lenny is excited. Yup,
41:18
yup. A few
41:20
minutes later, I
41:23
had footsteps in the dead
41:25
leaves and the edge of the bush. I
41:28
did bark like Lenny when
41:30
Shivani and me used a truer bowl to
41:32
eat a fetch. Then,
41:36
I heard Lenny, Shivani called again,
41:39
into the jungle father,
41:41
backing up over fallen
41:43
trees and through
41:45
branches I whimper like Lenny's
41:48
root. I miss
41:50
him, poor puppy. It
41:52
wasn't he false either, right mama? It
41:55
was Shivani. It was always
41:57
Shivani. She made my whole life a
41:59
better place. Lenny wasn't being again and
42:02
again. Shivani starts to
42:04
run and crash through the trees.
42:06
Lenny, Lenny, where are you, Poppy?
42:09
She's free. She
42:12
was scared. Good. She
42:17
trips over the rocks and starts a
42:20
cry about bugs and tears. She drags.
42:22
Woof woof! Where
42:25
are you, Lenny? You can't be far.
42:27
She stops moving. Where
42:30
am I? She asks,
42:32
crying. I laugh
42:36
and she screams a lot because she hears us. Shivani!
42:40
Uncle Ramgold. They come
42:43
from the house that looks as she. I
42:45
copy he voiced. Shivani! I yell,
42:48
Shivani? She footsteps back
42:50
and forth. She
42:53
wasn't sure which direction to go. Shivani!
42:56
I call again and
42:58
she moves towards me. I start
43:01
to back away towards the place
43:03
where the wild dogs kill Lenny.
43:06
I wouldn't look away this time. It
43:09
should have been she instead of a Poppy.
43:12
Samantha! Her footsteps stop.
43:15
Samantha! It
43:18
was Mama's voice. It
43:21
hock into me like a sight. While
43:25
she was out here, she must
43:28
be looking for Shivani. She
43:30
didn't need me anymore. I
43:32
wanted to back away, but I
43:34
couldn't. She spoke on the
43:37
seat when towards her voice. Samantha!
43:41
She called like when she woke many
43:43
mornings of school. Samantha! She
43:45
said like when she laughed at the jokes. Samantha!
43:50
She sang like when she put me
43:52
to bed when I was little. Samantha!
43:56
She cried like the dears. She laughed
43:58
at the sentry. I
44:01
couldn't stop myself from going to sheath. I
44:04
pass Shivani's scratch up and bloody,
44:07
sittin' on an old rotten tree.
44:11
She get up and follow my
44:13
back the way I lead she towards
44:15
the house. When
44:18
she could see the yard, she run past
44:20
me out of the bush. Shivani?"
44:24
I hear Uncle Ramsay. He
44:27
was choke up again, cryin'. Mama's
44:30
waist up. "'Daddy?"
44:33
Shivani saw. I
44:36
sit down and I wish I'd never
44:38
come back here because all they want
44:41
was Shivani and not me anymore. I
44:45
belong with the dad, not with my
44:47
loved one, Mama. They
44:49
would call the auntie to do something, Samana again
44:51
for sure. I stand
44:53
up to go back deeper into the bush. Samanta?"
44:59
I hear Mama again through the stomach.
45:02
I turn around. She was standing
45:04
there, in front of me. Tears
45:07
on she sees. The
45:09
red string from she rests was gone.
45:13
And I could see Alyssa's mother, the
45:15
auntie behind she. There
45:18
she, the auntie see.
45:21
Mama come towards me and put she hand
45:23
on the neck. She
45:26
stare at me tiny mouth and
45:28
no eyesease and smile as
45:30
she tears. She
45:33
was shook when
45:35
she took. I
45:38
can see her now, Samanta really.
45:42
She hug me up, tight,
45:44
tight, tight. She's
45:47
a good girl. Well
45:53
done. You survived another story. What did
45:56
you think of Dwen by Susan Palumbo?
45:59
If you're a Patreon subscriber, please subscribe. subscriber, we encourage you to
46:01
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46:04
Susan shared this about her heartbreaking
46:06
tale. This story is set
46:08
at my grandmother's house in Trinidad. The
46:11
story itself is written in dialect the way I
46:13
would have spoken it. It poured out of my
46:15
head that way fully completed. Because
46:17
I'm part of the diaspora, it is really reflective
46:19
of how my parents spoke to me as a
46:21
child, and it is the most unfiltered story I've
46:24
ever written. On
46:26
a personal note, as a great fan
46:28
of short fiction, I was immersed in
46:30
Samantha's story from the beginning. The sheer
46:32
tragedy of her death, the unfairness of
46:34
her afterlife, her jealousy and fear of
46:36
being forgotten and replaced. All of this
46:38
made her tale both deeply heartbreaking and
46:41
uncomfortably understandable. We often hear
46:43
tales of vengeful spirits who attack the ones
46:45
they love, but it is rare to read
46:47
a story that so beautifully communicates how human
46:49
our supernatural creatures truly are. Samantha's
46:52
transition from confusion to sadness to
46:54
anger to wrath is impactful
46:56
because, after hearing her story, after
46:58
following along, we understand how easily
47:01
we too could transform in this
47:03
way. This story is
47:05
not only brilliant in terms of
47:07
voice and perspective, but Susan Palumbo's
47:10
use of bubbles throughout two mothers,
47:12
two daughters, two Dwen was both
47:14
emotionally impactful and brilliant formally. Finally,
47:16
I just want to say that I really love
47:19
the ending. Many horror stories end in tragedy. You
47:21
might think that Shivani's death was the
47:23
logical progression and logical result
47:26
of Samantha's change, but we
47:28
have Alyssa's mother, the auntie, who sees the child
47:30
within the Dwen throughout. It is
47:32
the auntie who reunites Samantha with her
47:34
mother, and with that, she ends a
47:36
tragic story with hope. Finally,
47:40
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